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Its called "February Will Be Magic" February Will Be Magic Hey Victoria when we’re all alone We can kiss in heaven, kiss in the skies Let’s not be bad sports and postpone (this kiss) Just like my dad when he drives (postponing eating) But February Will Be Magic (For You and Me) (Refrain) For... show more Its called "February Will Be Magic"

February Will Be Magic

Hey Victoria when we’re all alone
We can kiss in heaven, kiss in the skies
Let’s not be bad sports and postpone (this kiss)
Just like my dad when he drives (postponing eating)
But February Will Be Magic (For You and Me) (Refrain)

For Valentines Day I want to be your secret admirer
Get you a sweet card, write in something sweet
As a friend you’re my priority and I wanna make your day brighter
And this card is so special it can’t be beat (Refrain)

For this last week I can’t stop thinking about you
Your striking beauty is haunting my mind
If you go out with me I’ll be your best friend, lover, and I’ll be true
I have a history of letdowns and understand if you don’t; just be kind
Oh thats why February Will Be Magic

When you walk by I get butterflies
And yes, even boys do but we don’t say anything
I get butterflies in my eyes and by my cries (of my love for you)
Because you’re my everything (Refrain)

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