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I don't have a title for my song but I got the meaning down pat. It's about my cousin being fake even though he says he's not. I want this to be a pop song with a short rap in it. Unknown Title..... You kept bullying me about being bi When in reality you are gay You say you’re straight but... show more I don't have a title for my song but I got the meaning down pat. It's about my cousin being fake even though he says he's not.

I want this to be a pop song with a short rap in it.

Unknown Title.....

You kept bullying me about being bi
When in reality you are gay
You say you’re straight but that’s a lie
You’re a flamer; I know in the month of May
You said this is not you
But you kept touching my rectum
Yet when I look and ask you say it’s not true
I then analyzed the viewpoint spectrum
(Chorus)

You bring over your friend Joe
I can’t believe he’s this tall, this sexy
Yet I think he and I know
I defended him from my cousin, let’s call him Lexi
He acts like a girl, he does
Whines, groans for what he wants
I know why, it’s because
What he doesn’t have, for it his desire he flaunts
(Chorus)

Chorus
You control Joe just like a pair of puppets
Even though you say you’re one in the wrong
And you treat Joe like one of the Muppets
That’s why I’m writing this lovely song
I need to express
Why my life is the way it is
Because of people like Tory, I confess
I get shiz

You control Joe like a video game
Yet when you lose one
You act all lame
Stop doing this, be done
(Chorus)

*Repeat Chorus x2*
*End song*
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