I wrote a song about my moms stepdad being an ahole. Is it good?

Its called "Every Weekend" (because I wait for Monday to come so i can get away from him): Because of you stepdad I can't be glad; just drown in sorrow Because of the things you say to me and I'm so mad I know you hate me, but there's a tomorrow It's called Monday, and i have to go... show more Its called "Every Weekend" (because I wait for Monday to come so i can get away from him):

Because of you stepdad
I can't be glad; just drown in sorrow
Because of the things you say to me and I'm so mad
I know you hate me, but there's a tomorrow
It's called Monday, and i have to go to school (The only place I can get away from you) (Refrain)

Every weekend's filled with fear
Because I'm sensitive, don't know what you'll do to me
And every weekend I want Monday to be near
I stay in my room away from you, crying like a tree (releasing water (Refrain)

REFRAIN
Oh I reach out for help to my aunt
I tell her the mean things you do to me
I told her in confidence, but you found out like John of Gaunt (another Alpha male just like you)
Auntie I also told you in confidence like things out to be (trying to stay outta trouble)
But now you think I'm not a man for calling her (Even though real men say 'I need help' sometimes)

By telling my aunt I tried to make
Enduring every weekend easier
But I failed and got burned at the stake (Mom ratted me out)
Like Joan of Arc someone told on me too but i got queasier (she lost her life)
Oh every weekend ain't gettin' better (Refrain)

It's just getting harder to endure
You putting me down with the things you say; forcing me to eat
Like farmers forcing innocent, poor cows to eat manure
It's not sweet, it's just wishing the farmer's defeat (his death) (Refrain)

Mom, every day I tell you how I feel
Figure you'd do something about him
But you ignore me like Cinderella's mom did to her
And my chances of happiness (him leaving) are very slim (Refrain)

Like it?
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