Are my songs good? 10pts best answer?

I'm Cool Like That I spit out rhymes just like the New York Times For an allowance my mom’s boyfriend gives me dimes So I go out and spend them at the corner store When I have no money left I just ask for more (Refrain) Because I’m cool like that I can do anything If I just start remembering That I... show more I'm Cool Like That

I spit out rhymes just like the New York Times
For an allowance my mom’s boyfriend gives me dimes
So I go out and spend them at the corner store
When I have no money left I just ask for more (Refrain)

Because I’m cool like that
I can do anything
If I just start remembering
That I have a soul
And I’m the lightskinned Nat King Cole

There’s a bully named Alex
He’s just jealous of my songwriting talent
But I don’t care about him, i keep on movin
Just like Post-Revolution Cubans (Refrain)

I hate being single at my age
I don’t have a job, but i do get minimum wage
Cuz I tell mom’s boyfriend my daily eating
And I never give myself time to adjust my seating (Refrain)


Advance to Fame – Donald Simmons

When I doubt myself I always think
I can do something better, I always will
So I try not to have my attitude stink
As I stay chill
I try not to be on the brink
Of non-free will
(Chorus)

I think I’m all alone
When people degrade me
I try to level down my vocal tone
But get people to try and see that
(Chorus)

No one believes in me
How can I make it
When people wait years till their big day
Ugh, why don’t I just die in a pit
(Chorus)

See the problem is that I’m pansexual
And I can’t come out to anyone
Because they see me as a straight intellectual
Not someone insecure and thinking he’s done
(Chorus)

Why can’t I just advance to fame
I think it’s because of my age
Yet and still Justin Bieber made it, but he’s lame
But I deserve to do comedy on a stage
And be tame just the same
Without falling off my dream page [dream page=my dream: comedy and trying to become a comedian]
(Chorus)

Chorus
Don’t talk that way
You are better than you are right now
Always know that, and stay strong all the way
Down the path called I’m Having a Cow

Bridge
I’m very smart but people don’t know
They always underestimate me as a person
And they don’t know I can be ghetto
And when I want to I start cursin’
(Chorus)

*Repeat chorus 4x*
*End of the song*
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