I wrote a song about my best friend/crush. Is it great?

Its called "Julia This One's For You" and its a song about the many wonderful qualities of my best friend/crush Julia Julia This is For You Julia you're the l'amour de ma vie (Love of my life - French) I'd go a thousand miles for you I'd try to win a race if you were the... show more Its called "Julia This One's For You" and its a song about the many wonderful qualities of my best friend/crush Julia


Julia This is For You

Julia you're the l'amour de ma vie (Love of my life - French)
I'd go a thousand miles for you
I'd try to win a race if you were the trophy
Because to you I'll always be true
(Refrain)

Julia je ne me vois pas moins que vous (I can't see myself without you)
If we are not unified as one forever
We can be star crossed lovers sneaking out past curfew
It'll truly be a wonderful endeavor
(Refrain)

Refrain
Julia This is For You
You are my sun and I am the light
I look at your sun's beauty every day, that's true
And if someone gets in my way I'll fight the good fight

Parmi est bien faible quand on est amoureux. (One is very weak when one is in love)
Julia honey you are my weakness
I go to you like a hand fits to a glove, not solo
I freeze when I'm around you with such a bleakness
(Refrain)

Julia tu es ma Juliette et moi ton Roméo (means Julia you are my Juliet and I your Romeo)
We're two star crossed lovers enduring the toughest hardships
If I won a jackpot that was you I'd have a vast fortune, an outflow
All I know is that for you I'd take a thousand mile trip
(Refrain)

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