How can i finish my song about me and my mom being emotionally abused?

I based it off of Madonnas song "Oh Father" because I'm LIVING in that life; everything that happened to the little girl in the music video happened to me. So I wrote a song about my moms new boyfriend--the abuser, me and mom are victims--called "Why?" Why? You came in my home one... show more I based it off of Madonnas song "Oh Father" because I'm LIVING in that life; everything that happened to the little girl in the music video happened to me.

So I wrote a song about my moms new boyfriend--the abuser, me and mom are victims--called "Why?"


Why?

You came in my home one day
Befriended my mother, thought you got to me
I was 14, and you took the power yet I had no say
My mother felt powerless, she couldn’t see his lies were filthy
I hoped you’d leave, but time froze; hope turned gray
But you stayed here, like a strong tree
(Refrain)

I woke up one day, normal and boring
Found my room in a mess, papers all over the floor
You framed me for it, I say; your anger was soaring
My mother even told you go out that door
Now she’s taken that back, to you shes adoring
And she’s been through abuse, yet she wants more
(Refrain)

Then after that you bossed me around
Mopped the floor, hoping I’d fall getting the trash
My mother was there; she heard it all, yet she couldn’t speak out loud
If I could’ve killed you, I would; it’d be good that you’re a pile of ash
Since you think you’re so smart, why don’t you leave? It’s right, it’s profound
(Refrain)

I waited for months for a victory
It took an eternity to get one; at least he was arrested
Contradictory
attested


I need lines for the Contradictory and Attested parts.. what can i fill in? That verse is my chorus. Contradictory and attested are my rhyming words for the lines... i use ABAB song form.
Update: steve its not retarded everything in my song happened to me.
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