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Its called "Thinking of You:. I wrote it imagining it to have the melody Patsy Clines song "Strange" (It was in my head all day lol; i like my friend and i am in high school lol. this was REALLY about her) Thinking of You - Donald Simmons I think of you in the saddest of times I think of you... show more Its called "Thinking of You:. I wrote it imagining it to have the melody Patsy Clines song "Strange" (It was in my head all day lol; i like my friend and i am in high school lol. this was REALLY about her)

Thinking of You - Donald Simmons

I think of you in the saddest of times
I think of you as committing no love crimes
But that shouldn't stop me from thinking of you
Should it?

When we're together i squirm and fear
That you won't come into my heart, but I
See you as a goddess of love; a Venus
The dominus one when you enter my heart

Oh yes I'm thinking of you
In your better days and through all
In your low points and when your emotions decay
I'm thinking of you

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