Wrote a song; is it good?

This is what I have so far... 3 verses and a chorus and all I need is the bridge. My song is called This Is The Time This Is The Time I know I’ve had my downfall I’ve been through a tough time Finding love all in all Yet and still I’ve been a lemon-lime Had my ups and downs but I will never... show more This is what I have so far... 3 verses and a chorus and all I need is the bridge.

My song is called This Is The Time



This Is The Time

I know I’ve had my downfall
I’ve been through a tough time
Finding love all in all
Yet and still I’ve been a lemon-lime
Had my ups and downs but I will never fall
Because now I know
(Chorus)

I have a good friend
Who loves me for me
At first I was doubtful we’d survive till the end
But now I see, finally
He loves me enough to extend
A hand out, he has so much bravery
Because he knows
(Chorus)

At first he defended himself, said he’s not gay
But today he told me we could try things out
And I feel our love will never fade away
Because there’s never a moment where we pout
Because
(Chorus)

Chorus
This is the time
Please act now
Think with your mind, you feel fine
Don’t say no, and don’t take a final bow
It’s not a heinous crime
Update: Grell of course its for my guy friend and he wants to "try things" with me ;)
Awesome right?
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