Is my song wonderful? 1 for excellent, 5 for terrible?

So I'm 15 and in high school, so it's mandatory I go through a rejection-by-girls phase. And there's also the two-faced-friend phase. That 2 faced friend mostly would be a boy, but in my case, it's a girl. My 'friend' Julia; this song is for every girl who has done me wrong, but Julia... show more So I'm 15 and in high school, so it's mandatory I go through a rejection-by-girls phase. And there's also the two-faced-friend phase. That 2 faced friend mostly would be a boy, but in my case, it's a girl. My 'friend' Julia; this song is for every girl who has done me wrong, but Julia specifically:
My song's called "So Fake":


So Fake – Donald Simmons

When I first befriended you
I perceived you to be friendly, cute
This was, but now isn’t, so true
Now I’ve made this situation astute
And you are
(Chorus)

Our journey called friendship progresses
I gave you gifts that you loved
All the while I still made emotional messes
Tried winning my way to your heart, pushed, shoved
But I soon found out, you are
(Chorus)

You rejected me 3 times
Yet I came crawling back
If those times were 3 dimes
I’d have thirty cents, I’d lack
The money to buy you anything, oh, you’re
(Chorus)

I invite you to a movie
Casually as friends
You said yes, then ditched me like I was at juvi
That broke off our friendship rope’s ends
You are untrustworthy and
(Chorus)

Chorus
So fake, why don’t you pose
As a woman saying she’s nice
Going to one’s heart, you buy a rose
One says your gift giving won’t suffice

Bridge
I should’ve moved on
When I had the chance
But I didn’t get gone
Now my prediction of romance
Is so sawn

Repeat chorus x4
End

So is it excellent or terrible?
Update: There's 4 verses and a repeat, so that when I go and make an instrumental for this song it will be a long enough length.
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