Is this a great song? Its about the things my moms bf does to me?

Its called "Get Out" Get Out -- Donald Simmons I know you hate me So you tear me down piece by piece Calling me every name in the book, making me give up emotionally Like making me sell a lease Get Out (Refrain) Why would you make me cry Say “I’m nobody” and “I’m so lazy” And use me... show more Its called "Get Out"


Get Out -- Donald Simmons


I know you hate me
So you tear me down piece by piece
Calling me every name in the book, making me give up emotionally
Like making me sell a lease
Get Out (Refrain)

Why would you make me cry
Say “I’m nobody” and “I’m so lazy”
And use me like I’m clothing hung out to dry
Like I’m Driving Miss Daisy
You’re so selfish, so Get Out (Refrain)

Chorus (Refrain)

How can you be so selfish
How can you be so cruel
You call me a person thats devilish
When you’re 55 with rusty karate skills, let’s duel
Why be a put down of a man, Get Out

I want to Breakout, rebel against your evil ways
But I’m afraid of what you might do to me
But we all have those terrible days
And I have a light that I can’t reach, can’t see
I’m giving up on life because of you, Get Out (Refrain)

Why would you force me to eat
Just let me make decisions for myself, I’m human too
But when I stand up to you I get beat?
Worst of all with your own shoe?
Why put me in a corner, Get Out (Refrain)

Its good right? If it isn't how can i improve it?

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Update: Its supposed to be a sad, slow paced song. I'd love to have Sia Furler sing it when i get famous. :)
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