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  • what doi you think about my poem ? M.N.?

    3. Ways to go

    Choices to make

    Each has its outcome

    Allot it will take.

    Not easy decision

    Not easy to come by

    Not going to break

    Not going to stand by

    Wrong is done, fixed it will be

    But will it be me

    Who changes this destiny?

    The hardship to come

    I'll have to deal with

    If my choice was taking responsibility over this

    On the other hand

    I can lead a relaxed life.

    Not knowing, not worrying

    After all ignorance is a blessing.

    1 AnswerPoetry9 years ago
  • What do you think about my poem? !M.N!?

    Im so dreamy that you'll be near me

    but you don't see me

    thought you're standing here with me

    i looked in you're eyes

    it sparkle like a dazzling night

    the truth , i wont confess

    i hinted you so understand and don't leave a mess

    just know that

    i can't hold it anymore

    i'm quitting and going home

    suddenly i saw you standing there

    accidental we bump

    and fell on the stair

    it physics , i mean chemistry

    in the end we got married

    you & me

    By !M.N!

    3 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • what do you think about my poem ?! !M.N!?

    well when i wrote it it was suppose to be romantic but that is not it at all i guess thought came that way oh well ...

    Shifting the light of a shining star

    You control everything , whoever you are

    Take responsibility ,take a stand

    Not really powerful i can tell you that

    Green monsters that fly called helicopter and you can't deny

    Monster is all you see

    Under the mask that hide you true enemy

    An enemy inside of you

    You act as if you never knew

    Don't give him a break don't let him thought

    Keep him locked in with no breaking out of you

    Don't you judge me Only god can do

    Under his command i will stand

    One strong light and the world is saved

    And you know so give me you're hand and lets go pray

    P.S. emm the enemy is the evil, anger ...

    By !M.N!

    2 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • What do you think about my poem ?!?

    <3 A Secret In heart <3

    I try to hide it

    But i can't anymore

    It not that simple , i know you know

    My mask will not shatter

    I will not cry

    I will keep it hidden

    And i will deny

    The truth will not be told

    It will be kept in my heart

    Pushed deep inside with a lock on the side

    The key is thrown to the deep ocean

    Suddenly i was invited to a restaurant

    I ordered a fish

    And you can guess

    Like in the famous story

    I really found it

    The key to open whats in my chest

    Did you understand

    The truth is out

    I LOVE YOU

    How wonderful is that .

    4 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • comment on my poem pleas ...?

    The sun is burning

    The earth is turning

    And I'm sitting here all alone

    Not knowing where I am

    Or where I came from

    Waiting for a knight to get me out of the dark

    And in a moment I saw something bright

    It was you my shining knight .

    And I'm so thankful that you are thoughtful

    Bringing me under the moonlight

    I wanted to TELL you in the shining night

    But I felt sleepy and it became bright

    Woke up dreamy but you weren't near me

    Then I chose what I wanted to say

    Instead of I love you

    I don't care ...

    so what do you think ...

    2 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • What do you think about my poem ?!?

    The sun is burning

    The earth is turning

    And i'm sitting here all alone

    Not knowing where i am

    Or where i came from

    Waiting for a knight to get me out of the dark

    And in a moment i saw something bright

    It was you my shining knight .

    and i'm so thankful that you are thoughtful

    bringing me under the moonlight

    i wanted to TELL you in the shinning night

    but i felt sleepy and it became bright

    woke up dreamy but you weren't near me

    then i choosed what i wanted to say

    instead i love you

    i don't care ...

    1 AnswerBooks & Authors1 decade ago
  • what do you think about my short poem ?! (part 1)?

    waiting here all alone

    thinking i can stay strong

    knowing in my heart it wont take long

    tell i quite and go home.

    but you're here supporting me strong

    to not fail or lose control

    it is stupied to quite i know but i just can't hold it anymo' .

    ok i don't know what to continue , but what do you think about my first part

    6 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • what do you think about my poem ?!?

    The sun is burning

    The earth is turning

    And i'm sitting here all alone

    Not knowing where i am

    Or where i came from

    Waiting for a knight to get me out of the dark

    And in a moment i saw something bright

    It was you my shining knight .

    so what do you think ?!!

    5 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • Cannot implicitly convert type 'int' to 'bool' (error C# help )?

    what is wrong ?!! in this i can't fix it !!

    using System;

    using System.Collections.Generic;

    using System.Linq;

    using System.Text;

    namespace ILOVEYOU

    {

    class Program

    {

    static void Main(string[] args)

    {

    int num;

    Console.WriteLine("I Love You");

    Console.WriteLine("do u want to continue: prees 1 ");

    num = int.Parse(Console.ReadLine());

    while (num=1)

    {

    Console.WriteLine("I Love You");

    Console.WriteLine("do u want to continue: prees 1 ");

    num = int.Parse(Console.ReadLine());

    }

    Console.WriteLine("Finish");

    }

    }

    }

    1 AnswerProgramming & Design1 decade ago
  • random word realted to horticulture - with hint !!!?

    random word related to horticulture .

    hint: agricultural-robyn-fun-unpresidented-equillibrium-weeding-cheddar-snowling-pesticide.

    so what is it ?!!

    2 AnswersWords & Wordplay1 decade ago