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Ok so pretty much my story is about a girl, who is in high school. Her name is Rachel. Her father abuses her, and her two brothers. Alex, who is older than Rachel, and Daniel who is four. Alex and Rachel prevent their dad from hurting Daniel. The story is basically how Rachel escapes her father, and some other things happen as well that hinders her. Her mother died when she was young, her dad actually killed her because she told someone about the abuse. The dad threatens to kill whoever told and who they told it to. Soon the dad remarries.
One idea I have, and most likely will put in the story, is that Rachel (sometime in the late beginning of story) meets someone that soon becomes her boyfriend. I am having it so that he also abuses her. It would be kinda like a parallel to the dad. She gets away from her abusive boyfriend (help from her best friend) and realizes that in order to get away from her dad, she has to get help from her friends. Even though it is really dangerous to tell anyone, because he will kill her.
Also any review on the idea would be great. To me some of it sounds cliche but I don't know.
Please give me constructive criticism, not just 'This idea sucks!' or 'So cliche'
I need major help please! I have been so stuck on ideas. I have major writer's block, and I have had it for a few days.5 AnswersBooks & Authors10 years ago
As long has there are stars in the sky,
I will love you
I will always be haunted
by you in my dreams.
My love for you is stronger
than any diamond.
When you speak,
you leave me speechless.
when our eyes met,
I get lost in them.
As long as I am with you, I
Can't you see that
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I dont know what it means
thanks4 AnswersVideo & Online Games1 decade ago
i need help
i am supposed to do a project were i have a menu for a restaurant and have to come up with a name and food and drinks (it has to be for french class) and i for the name of the restaurant i wanted to combine names and i am really bad at that
here are the names
Cross (last name)
thanks in advance
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The first person to answer all these riddles gets best answer
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I have space, but you cannot fill it,
You can enter, but you cannot leave.
What am I?
You use me between your head and toes, the more I works the thinner I grow.
What am I?
You heard me before,
Yet you hear me again.
Then I die, 'till you call me again
What am I?
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What did he put in the barrel?
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