*This is my introduction:
Today’s society offers multiple forms of entertainment, one of the most common being video games. Video games have existed for quite some time, and have made huge improvements since two dimensional days of Pong and Pacman. Two corporate giants who own the most common gaming consoles right now are Microsoft with Xbox 360, and Sony with Playstation 3. The two companies are always competing against one another for the right to have the superior gaming console. The game industry brings in roughly 36 Billon dollars world wide (Fullerton, Swain and Hoffman). The Xbox 360 and Playstation 3 both have qualities where they excel and qualities where they lack. The two gaming consoles can be compared in game selections, the ability for online game play, and game graphics.
* My teacher says that the word COMPARED can not be in my thesis statement, and im kind of stuck on how to reword it.
any help is appreciated! (thesis is the last sentence for anyone who dosent know already :)