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I love to make people laugh, and I love to read and write. I have a dog, Wesley, a doberman pinscher. I am currently going out with a hot babe named Andrew. We love each other alot, and it is not a secret. I usually wear my pajamas at home, and when I'm not doing anything. Sooo...yeah.

  • I need some help with the plot of my novel?

    Emmoch is a boy who can't touch people. If he touches anyone, they die. Every week he visits a therapist and a psychologist, and every other week he visits a private doctor. Nobody knows why he can do it. He doesn’t mean to, they just start to convulse, and five minutes later they’re dead. Before the paramedics even get there. One day, while at a café, he meets a girl and he develops a crush on her. She gets in a fatal car accident, and he feels responsible for it, although he had no involvement whatsoever. He visits her in the hospital three days later. He sits beside her hospital bed and she tries to reach out to hold his hand. He pulls away automatically. She asks him why he can’t touch her. All she wants is to simply hold his hand. He explains to her his problem, and she surprisingly understands. He asks for her aid, and she undoubtedly agrees. She’s more help than any therapist ever was to him. They decide to look for his father, and ask him questions about his mother, her pregnancy and their relationship.

    So, I want him to go to prison at one point, and I'm thinking maybe he'll be apart of a mass prison break? I'm not sure. There's also going to be some suicidal thoughts on his part (its in first person), and he's going to struggle really badly. Also, the CIA is trying to recruit him, and the FBI is trying to arrest him, so there's a lot of conflict with that. I'm also planning on putting the girl (her name is Delilah) in danger, and he's going to have to find a way to save her without touching her.

    But I need more. I need some good plot twists and things. Can you guys maybe give me some ideas on how to make it more exciting? Really, anything. Tell me if there are any plot holes, thanks guys!

    3 AnswersBooks & Authors8 years ago
  • What GENRE would you put this in?

    My plot is about a boy named Emmoch, and he CANNOT touch people. If he touches people, they die. Every week he visits a therapist and a psychologist, and every other week he visits a private doctor. Nobody knows why he can do it. He doesn’t mean to, they just start to convulse, and five minutes later they’re dead. Before the paramedics even get there. One day, while at a café, he meets a girl and he develops a crush on her. She gets in a fatal car accident, and he feels responsible for it, although he had no involvement in it. He visits her in the hospital three days later. He sits beside her hospital bed and she tries to reach out to hold his hand. He pulls away automatically. She asks him why he can’t touch her. All she wants is to simply hold his hand. He explains to her his problem, and she surprisingly understands. He asks for her help, and she undoubtedly agrees. She’s more help than any therapist ever was to him. They decide to look for his father, and ask him questions about his mother, her pregnancy and their relationship.

    i was thinking fantasy, but then i though mystery and suspense might be good too... gahhh!! i dont know!!

    thanks!

    Angelina<3

    2 AnswersBooks & Authors8 years ago
  • MY PLOT IS AN ABSOLUTE MESS! AND NANOWRIMO! HELLLPPP!!?!?!?!?!?

    Okay, so I’m super stuck.

    My plot is about a boy named Emmoch, and he CANNOT touch people. If he touches people, they die. Every week he visits a therapist and a psychologist, and every other week he visits a private doctor. Nobody knows why he can do it. He doesn’t mean to, they just start to convulse, and five minutes later they’re dead. Before the paramedics even get there. One day, while at a café, he meets a girl and he develops a crush on her. She gets in a fatal car accident, and he feels responsible for it, although he had no involvement in it. He visits her in the hospital three days later. He sits beside her hospital bed and she tries to reach out to hold his hand. He pulls away automatically. She asks him why he can’t touch her. All she wants is to simply hold his hand. He explains to her his problem, and she surprisingly understands. He asks for her help, and she undoubtedly agrees. She’s more help than any therapist ever was to him. They decide to look for his father, and ask him questions about his mother, her pregnancy and their relationship.

    THERE’S THE PROBLEMO. I suck at these ‘quest’ type stories, but I really wanna continue it. It’s for NaNoWriMo, so I don’t have long! I just really want it to be good, but I also want to finish it in time (I know, I know. It’s gonna be nearly impossible to get it PERFECT, but I’ll do anything to try my best!)

    So, any suggestions on how they search for his father? I don’t want it to be “GET IN THE CAR THE GOVERNMENT IS AGAINST US AND EVERYTHING WE DO WE NEED TO HURRY THIS IS URGENT”, although I do plan for there to be some kind of problem with the law. I just need suggestions and help! Please, please, please! Sorry if this is hard to understand!

    Thank you so so so so so so so so so much!

    Angelina<3

    PS: any tips for NANOWRIMO are very much appreciated! its my first year!! thanks!

    3 AnswersBooks & Authors8 years ago
  • Is this a hooking prologue?

    When I say 'hooking', I mean it as if you'd want to keep reading the story. I need to know now so I can know whether or not I should continue this story.

    Loud footsteps thundered above. The low ceiling trembled and littered dust. Screams suddenly filled the building. They stuck out like stars on a cloudless night. Nothing could be more terrifying than hearing your own family be beaten to death.

    Coraly was in the basement. She had been instructed to go there. She had a stuffed dog with her and nothing else. This dog kept her sane. Without it, she might’ve drowned in the world of darkness. Whenever she would squeeze the dog’s rough and flat fur, she was comforted by the fact that she was still sensible, but also put ill at ease with the reminder she was still alive.

    The door opened and Coraly screamed.

    Constructive criticism is AWESOME! Thank you so much!

    4 AnswersBooks & Authors8 years ago
  • Would You Read This Story?

    So… pretty much its about the first district 12 victor of the Hunger Games…it’s a fan-fiction, which I don’t usually do, but I gave it a shot. Heres a link to it on my Wattpad. Enjoyy!!

    http://www.wattpad.com/3622570-the-hunger-games-th...

    3 AnswersBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • Does my plot sound interesting to anyone?

    Malakai Embrence lives in a country with a president who hates women. A woman stood up to him and told him he wasn't doing a good job as the president, which he honestly wasn't. From then on, he hated women and tried to kill every one of them. Malakai is worried for his two five year old sisters, Brekkan and Phoebe, hoping and praying everyday that they don't get killed.

    His father is unfit to protect them, seeing as he's always either at work or sleeping. His father was once both physically and emotionally strong, then Malakai's mother and two older sisters died and his father fell apart. He still retained his large muscles, but the strength and courage in his heart faded greatly.

    Malakai then meets a brave girl named Pippa that attends his school (most girls stay home from school in fear of being killed) and poses as a boy. He is inspired by her and introduces her to Brekkan and Phoebe.

    Gradually, Malakai and Pippa start to rebel. They stand up to the Rutavs (the guards that kill the women) and try to defy them and plan on murdering the President Crosimir Ogden.

    Please tell me what you think! Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated! Thanks in advance!

    2 AnswersBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • Does Anyone Else Love This Character As Much As I Do?

    Actually, its not possible. No one can love Peeta Mellark as much as me. I cried about a million times during Mockinjay. And did anyone else feel so heartbroken when Katniss had the proposal planned and then Peeta wanted it to be real!?!? Oh my gosh, I love him so much!! I'm saving up my money for a cardboard cut-out of him!! Yayyy!!! So, does anyone else love Peeta!?

    6 AnswersBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • Names For Guards Not Unlike the Nazi's?

    I'm writing a story and theres these guys that are kind of like the Nazi's. They support the very unworthy and unfair president of a large futuristic country.

    If you guys could help me come up with a group name like the Nazi guard names, that would be awesome. Like something that means 'heartless' or 'indifferent' in a witty way from another language. Not like actual names (Joseph, Henry, ect), but names that are for a group of people. I originally planned on calling them Forts, but I don't like it. Help?

    Thank you so much!!

    PS - I know I already asked this, but I'm asking it again! :P

    3 AnswersBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • Good Names For These Guard Kinda Things?

    I'm writing a story and theres these guys that are kind of like the Nazi's. They support the very unworthy and unfair president of a large futuristic country.

    If you guys could help me come up with a name like the Nazi guard names, that would be awesome. Like something that means 'forceful' or 'indifferent' in a witty way from another language.

    Thank you so much!!

    2 AnswersBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • What's this song called?? Can someone help me out!?

    Its like, theres this guy singing and then another guy raps, and then a girl sings and then someones all like AHHHHHH AHHH AH!! Can you guys help me, I'm really stuck and I need to know what its called by tommorrow!

    2 AnswersLyrics9 years ago
  • Your First Makeout?!?!?

    Just wondering(:

    1st Kiss:

    1st Makeout:

    1st Date:

    Lost Virginity:

    Sorry, I'm bored(: Tell me how old you were when it happened and even the stories!! Thanks!

    7 AnswersSingles & Dating9 years ago
  • Has anyone else had this dream?

    Last night, I had a dream I made out and slept with Leonardo DiCaprio. Just wondering if anyone else has experienced this WONDERFUL dream?

    4 AnswersDream Interpretation9 years ago
  • OH CRAP! I think my best friend likes me...?!?!?!?

    My best friend, Ryan, is the sweetest guy you could ever meet. He's had one girlfriend, but she dumped him cause she's just a ***** and didnt ever get to know him. He hasnt gone out with anyone since, and the poor kid is still recovering. He's my best friend in the whole world, I tell him everything. We have a ton of inside jokes. He's cute, but I consider him nothing mroe than I friend. Whenever I bring up my boyfriend (which I try not to do around him) his smile falls a bit, but then he brings it back up. I feel terrible that I'm doing this, because I'm almost positive he likes me...ohh, Ryan! Don't do this! Please help!

    5 AnswersSingles & Dating9 years ago
  • Has Anyone Else Had This Dream...?

    Last night I had a dream I slept with and made out with Leonardo Decaprio. NO JOKE. It was the best dream I've ever had, but have any of you had it? Just wondering if you guys can relate.

    1 AnswerPsychology9 years ago
  • HARRY POTTER OR TWILIGHT?!?

    ...personally, I say Harry Potter...but I wanna see YOUR opinions....

    20 AnswersBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • Would you be able to tell if you got pooped on?

    I can't tell...I mean, theres this big fat nasty spot on the butt of my pants and I'm not sure if its poop or if its just some dark chocolate. I tried licking some of it and I didnt really taste anything...do you guys have any experience with this situation?

    2 AnswersEtiquette9 years ago
  • A Good Dog For an Old Man?

    In my story, an old man owns a dog, Beck. Right now he's a doberman pinchser, but do old men REALLY have dobermans? I dont think so...so can you guys help me think of a more realistic choice of breed....? It would really help me out, Thanks!

    5 AnswersBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • Making Out Question??

    Well, so at a whole school assembly, I got up to "go to the bathroom" and stood by the stairs, a minute later, my boyfriend got up to "go to the bathroom" and we walked upstairs into a supply closet and we made out. I even took off my shirt and was making out with him in my bra. We're both over 18, so it wasnt TOO bad, but could we get in serious trouble if we were caught doig that? there are kids making out during passing period, and they arent always different genders, so do you think its alright?

    9 AnswersSingles & Dating9 years ago
  • Halloween Ideas For a Young Couple?!?!?

    Well...me and my boyfriend are going trick or treating together, and we have one idea of what we (that is to say I) want to do. I think we should do Katniss and Peeta...but the problem is when he read the Hunger Games he was rooting for Gale...so I'm not sure what to do...please help me think of some ideas!! Thank you so much!

    3 AnswersSingles & Dating9 years ago
  • Halloween Ideas for a Young Couple!?!?

    Well...me and my boyfriend are going trick or treating together, and we have one idea of what we (that is to say I) want to do. I think we should do Katniss and Peeta...but the problem is when he read the Hunger Games he was rooting for Gale...so I'm not sure what to do...please help me think of some ideas!! Thank you so much!

    1 AnswerSingles & Dating9 years ago