Covens and Wiccans in my story? Or no Covens and Wiccans in my story?

Question

I`m writing one other story at the moment. But, this one is about a girl from Kenova, West Virginia. She only has one friend because she doesn`t fit into any of the cliques. She refers to herself as a "Lone Wolf". One night of her sophomore year she throws a message in a bottle into the Ohio River like she and her friend Jessica did as a kids. A Romanian boy later finds it and writes her back. They form a bond through their letters. But, I don`t want a regular Romance or Teen Romance. Like my main girl I`m a lover of the paranormal. I was thinking of making the guy a part of a powerful and feared coven and the girl a Wiccan. But, I want dark forces to endanger the girls life. How can I add to this idea? What should I do

Additional Details

I know Wicca is a religion. I plan to research it when I find the time.

Answer 1

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For me personly I would cut it out I think it would offend both Wiccans and Christians.

Answer 2

Oh, if it will offend them, then do it!

Answer 3

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Answer 4

Does the girl go to Romania? Or do you mean Transylvania, a region of Romania, where traditionally there are dark woodlands and places of mystery? And castles where people like Vlad Dracul once lived?

If the girl goes to Transylvania she might be in danger, but she could escape on a train, it's a steam train that travels up and down the mountains. It's called the Boutari-Subcetate line, link below.

Are there vampires and other monsters on the train, or is she safe?

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