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a lil story i started when i couldn't sleep...

He sits and waits, books out and open ready for... the door opens. In she comes, her thick brown luscious hair sweeping back as she turns to close the door. "I was talking to..." He doesn't even listen. His deep browns eyes are drawn to her lustful aqua ones. She walks past to her seat, her sweet scent like a drug to him- choking every word of sense out of his mouth and leaving him speechless.

Test? Damn, he never heard. Sitting this close to her really isn't good for his aim to try harder in class. Test begins - "Everyone spread out!" He makes his way to the other side of the classroom- relief. The test is actually do-able- Finished in no time. The cold pale walls of a biology classroom, believe it or not, are quite sickening to look at, so he turns around to nosy around the classroom. There she is, slap bang in the middle, and right at the front, with nothing but the empty air between them. She's stil working on her test, giving it quite a bemused look as if to say a million and one things. She deffinitely wasn't the best science student, but she was still hardworking and determined to do her best, and had a certain combination of sweetness, pleasantness and genuiness that he had rarely come across before. All the while, she was still working, and even though he wanted to, he couldn't take his eyes off of her- click. Pen down and she's finished. She looks through her paper, still giving it the odd bemused look. She closes it- 'She's bound to catch me now.' But no, she gazes at the clock, wishing that it would jump 25 minutes forward so that she could gain her freedom from both the long, dreary school day she had encountered, and the class that she hated with a passion.

Still hasn't noticed- just coughing and sniffing amongst the silence of science 16. There was a flu pandemic spreading, and fast, along with countless other viruses, yet he couldn't help but adore the acute sniffles coming from her. She takes off her authentic-looking gold bangle, looping it round her fingers like a wheel. Crap- busted. She glances over in his direction. His eyes dart straight to the ground, as if it was a magnet towards his eyes of steel.

20 minutes later and the bell rings- another school day over. Veryone empties out of the classroom- she parts with her friends, he parts with his.
"I'll ring you later!" He hears right behind his ears- the voice that makes him weak at the knees, along with the accent that they share which warms his heart. She's alone- Could this be opportunity knocking right on his forehead? Nope- He hears her voice again, gaining the attention of the girl infront of him and his two friends. She walks straight past them and joins her- one of her best friends, evident in that she's burst into laughter within seconds. All the while, he's still adoring her- her cheerful laugh and of course, her smile. The smile that could win any man's heart- the smile that had him hooked on this mysterious girl from the word go.

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i think you're in love. Give that to a chick and she'll fall for you Nt sure if you are bi but it's good