A Metaphysical Poem. Share your thoughts?

Question

I was scalping Andre Breton
For money and intel
When I woke in an angry river
Clawing for dear life
On a limb
Called Obtuse

And I couldn't see it

It spoke to me
In a snapping of twigs
It said 'I have a family'

It said
'Eliot is Obtuse
And so are Irish Catholics
In their own way'

Obtuse paused, as if to rest
Then cracked a final phrase
'And never forget it
The mirage
is
Obtuse--
it hides
the sand'

I nodded wordless
Slackened grip
Back
Into the angry current

And melted

Answer 1

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My first reaction was "ick".

Then my second reaction was "I wonder if the Cream Cheese in the fridge is any good."

Then my third reaction was to go Read Bloodninja.

Answer 2

How strange. I like this.

Answer 3

It runs around my brain and keeps slamming the doors "will you shut up in there? people are tryin' ta sleep for God's sake, sheesh!" tangental, freaky and very cool! Random!