Check grammar and puncuation?

Question

i think i have a lot of puncuation and grammar problems...help? and can you tell me if some of the ideas dont go to gether and what it should be? please and thank youu!

“We are all born marked for evil.” This quote, by Charles Baudelaire, portrays that all capable of sinning. It states that all are born human, human meaning imperfection, because no one is perfect. Numerous literary pieces convey this message. William Golding uses diction and strong verbs in “Lord of the Flies” in order to show all are capable of committing evil, rooting from our selfish desires, regardless of what portray themselves as.

Answer 1

Here is what I would write (note changes). Your grammar is actually ok, but your ideas are a little disjointed. I wonder why you say that Golding uses strong diction and verbs to show that all (even children) are capable of evil? (I have added question marks there.) I don't think it is his verbs that convey that...though his use of language may support it...anyway....

“We are all born marked for evil.” This quote, by Charles Baudelaire, argues that because all humans are born imperfect, they are all capable of sinning. Numerous other literary pieces convey this message. In "Lord of the Flies," William Golding uses diction (?) and strong verbs (?) to show that all humans, regardless of how they portray themselves, are capable of committing evil, which is rooted in their selfish desires.

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Answer 2

Nous sommes tous marqués né pour le mal. » Cette citation, par Charles Baudelaire, dépeint que tous capables du pêché. Elle déclare que toute est imperfection humaine et humaine née de signification, parce que personne n'est parfaite. Les morceaux littéraires nombreux donnent ce message. La prononciation d'utilisations de William Golding et les verbes forts dans le « seigneur des mouches » afin de montrer tous sont capables de commettre le mal, s'enracinant de nos désirs égoïstes, indépendamment de ce qui se dépeignent As.

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Answer 3

“We are all born marked for evil.” This quote, by Charles Baudelaire, portrays that all of us are capable of sinning. It states that all are born human, being imperfect, because no one is perfect. Numerous literary pieces convey this message. William Golding uses vivid descriptions and strong verbs in “Lord of the Flies” in order to show how all are capable of committing evil, coming from our selfish desires, regardless of how we portray ourselves.

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