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What do u think of my **Twilight** poem?

its called eternity and its from edwards point of view

ETERNITY:
you will always be my only one
i will love you unconditionally
for always and eternity

you smell so lovely
as are lips draw near, you see
the secret ive been hiding
i want you to choose me
not him

sometimes i dont think you can see
how dangerouse i really can be
so i ask you
why not choose the other man?
your answer is sweet
like the lullaby i sing

i cant wait for eternity with you
every day and every night
your face will be my gleaming light
i do not need heaven
if i have forever with you

our love is differant
human and vampire
but to me
your and angel god sent
you saved me
from my dark and lonely life
but now i have you
thats all i need
to be happy for eternity

so sleep my bella
dream happy dreams
in the morning youll see me
do not worry i wont leave
you are my everything
for always and eternity
  • 2 years ago

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yes i did make it up...it took me all night to do...but its worth it...im now working on a jacob peom.:)

2 years ago

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Coby [Diehard Twihard] [DA, RA] by Coby [Diehard Twihard] [DA, RA]
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That...was.....AWESOME! I loved it! That is just what Bella mean to Edward, you captured his feelings perfectly ^^
  • 2 years ago
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4 out of 5
Asker's Comment:
thank you...watch for my next poem about jacobs feelings...it will be on yahoo answers soon...maybe this week...:)♥
Coby [Diehard Twihard] [DA, RA] Coby [Diehard Twihard] [DA, RA]
Thank you for picking me as best answer. ANd I will read your Jacob poem (even though I hate Jacob just cause Bella's in love with him XD) It will probably be as good as your Edward poem though!

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Crazy_Gurl!!!♥ Crazy_Gu…
thanx but it will be a while till its done!

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amber v amber v
I am a singer/songwriter and I am trying to find talented writers of Twilight poetry. I am looking for some poetry to turn into some music and I found yours and I think it's amazing! I'm currently working on a cd and if I were to choose your poetry, you would get recognition on everything and be

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amber v amber v
featured on my site. It would put your work out there. If you would at all be interested, please email me at my email below( I don't use my yahoo as much) and we can talk! Thanks again so much!

Amber Vochatzer

dawn.vochatzer@gmail.com
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Amber Vochatzer- search my name and send me a msg

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mizta springa mizta springa
as much as i despise twilight, this actually one of the better poems i've read

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