Help Please!!?

Question

What do you think of this thesis:
In Cosmicomics, Italo Calvino makes scientific facts more interesting through his use of the same narrator, Qwfwq, in each short story, and incorperates his life into it, while still keeping the scientific aspect accurate

I need to write a 5-7 page paper on this, does it sound good?

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It's good, but i would stop after "qwfwq, in each story..."
then put the rest in your conclusion.
it is just a little bit long for a thesis statement.