Do you like this poem.?

Question

the fate of the flimflam
byeugene field.
a flimflam flopped from a fillamaloo,
where the pollywog pinkled so pale,
and the pipkin piped a petulant "pooh"
to the garrulous gawp of the gale.
"oh,woe to the swap of the sweeping swipe
that booms on the bobbling bay!"
snickered the snark to the snoozing snipe
that lurked where the lamprey lay.

the gluglug glinked in the glimmering gloam,
where the buzbuz bumbled his bee-
when the flimflam flitted, all flecked with foam,
from the sozzling and succulent sea.
"oh, swither the swipe, with its sweltering sweep!"
she swore as she swayed in a swoon,
and a doleful dank dumped over the deep,
to the lay of the limpid loon!

Answer 1

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Not bad, but try saying it when you've had a drop too much alcohol

Answer 2

Nice Poem. I Like it. It isn't serious and it is a great poem to tell kids. I am very entertained by it.

Answer 3

First of all, Kudos to answer # 1. Second, I wonder how invested you are into Dr. Suess? OR,,, Twas Brilig and the Slithey Toads, did Gire and Gimble in the.....................

I'll add a thought, with no offense to the last line, hopefully in your defense.

"To to lay of the limpid Loon"

I'd like to hope this was not absorbed
as merely a 5 point "lampoon"

Steven Wolf
Just my two "sense"

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Yikes,,, what comes after "WABE?" LOL

Answer 4

no

Answer 5

I love it! I think it flows very well and it's fun.

Answer 6

Heehee, I like it, its a bit of fun isnt it? Really good, do another :)

Answer 7

i read it through with some dismay

words all written in disarray

oh dear! oh dear ! what can i say

i guess your poems quite OK.

Answer 8

lol great poem

Answer 9

I hated it, its completely nonsensical and not in a good way