Discussion - Camielle?

Question

In “Rape: A Bigger Danger than Feminists Know”, Camille Paglia illuminates that females have been brainwashed by feminists into thinking that having an understanding of male sexuality isn’t necessary. She conveys feminism has tricked women into believing that they should go anywhere and do anything without fear of rape. She believed that women should always fear the danger of sexual pervasiveness. Her fault eradicates the mores of feminism as a primary reason for women being raped, but not enough evidence to blame the feminists for causing rape.
Unwanted sexual aggression is never a social or cultural value. There is some deficiency in their personality that causes them to do this. Some men grow up in a culture that accepts unwanted sexual aggression against women, so they do not realize the "unwanted" part.
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I need a good transition sentence to lead from the first paragraph to the second paragraph ....

Answer 1

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The topic sentence of your second paragraph and the third sentence of that paragraph contradict each other. Eliminate the first and put the third in its place.

Answer 2

Women must recognize the potential for getting raped in almost any scenario is always there. For instance, I will not run alone at night in any neighborhood (not just "bad" neighborhoods) because of the ever present potential of getting raped. Nor will I park my car in what women refer to as "the rape zone" in a parking lot, i.e., the dark nether regions of the parking lot.

Unwanted sexual aggression is something women can prevent. They need to not put themselves in situations where the possibility exists for a rape, and they need to be direct in social situations where someone is giving them unwanted sexual aggression.